Review Detail of Hua_Li_An in Moonlight Kiss

I'm not a fan of werewolf stories, but Carla made me like it. There is this way the author manipulates the story that it makes the readers feel like they were back in school with Carla as well. But, anyway, I still have to review this seriously so the author can improve more. Points to Improve: Just as I've noticed in her other book here, she often likes to tell the events rather than show them. There's nothing really wrong with that if it's done correctly, but seeing blocks of texts with no dialogues to break them can be hard on the eyes. Also, I'd like to point out to the author: Kindly be aware of the lengths of your paragraphs. This may sound weird, but as an avid reader and writer, seeing similar sized paragraphs again and again isn't nice to read. Try reading it yourself and you might get what I mean. Instead, try to make different sized paragraphs to make the flow of thoughts easier. Good Points: As I've briefly mentioned above, the writing can make you feel like you were back to high school yourself. It's nice because there are simple touches of life here and there. Also, I like the way you name your chapter titles. I saw how you used "as usual" a lot for emphasis on two chapters. It's nice. To conclude, it's a pretty nice story with an exciting plot. (I do get the desire to read werewolf novels now!). To the author, keep it up and keep improving your writing! P.S. Read in another review that you were Indian. Go Asian pride!