Review Detail of TiltedBoarr in Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System

Item: Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System
Rating: 2.4

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TiltedBoarrLv23yrTiltedBoarr

Well, 60 chapters and the story is quite bland. At some point, I started scrolling down and decided to drop this. If you don't have any idea for the story development, why do you write it anyway? Take a break, read something for the enlightenment and then improve your story.

Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System

Miko_Sayaki

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Miko_SayakiAuthorMiko_Sayaki

I've been taking breaks, every time I write, I take 3 days break. At least currently, that's what I'm doing right now. Besides, this is the first fic I've ever written since that first dark souls fic of mine.

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