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Laundry
LaundryLv42yr
2022-06-20 09:06

At the beginning there are some really funny parts but later on it gets a bit dull. And his setting as a shameless mage is rarely brought up. It seems like just a side note to the rest of the events. Also it is NOT complete. It ends abruptly and the major plot points aren't resolved. On that note, the plot is all over the place. I'm not sure who half of the people are. Like, some new character shows up and they're instantly friends? No background or depth. I think it had potential but failed on the execution. Still an enjoyable read but it could've been even better.

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