The moonlight shows us for what we really are! We are not among the living, and so we cannot die. But neither are we dead! For too long, I've been parched of thirst and unable to quench it. Too long I've been starvin' to death and haven't died. I feel nothin'. Not the wind on my face nor the spray of the sea, nor the warmth of a woman's flesh. [steps out into the moonlight, revealing his skeletal form] You best start believin' in ghost stories, Mister Author. You're in one!

Author you need to edit those chapters, I’m not trying to be a grammar nazi but let someone proof read the chaps it feels like you’re using google translator. Like some of the paragraphs are just hard to read with grammar.

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