Mark_Anthony_1Lv143yr
2021-05-25 23:39
This story was great, but yaoi showed up out of the blue and quickly became a significant focus of the story. Not sure why the author decided to include the love life of side characters and give it so much screen time, but it became a serious distraction to the main story. If you want to write a yaoi story, fine, but don't put it in the middle of a traditional romance novel!
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zhi_yiyueLv3
yeah. the sudden appearance of yaoi lost my interest in reading
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