Review Detail of A_Real in Emo Madness

This is absolutely beautiful, I loved every second of reading this short story. I know this kind of story isn’t for everyone but I think that’s what makes it special, it’s your story that only you can write. The writing quality is readable but could use some improvement, no stability of updates because this is just a short story, you managed to fit more story development in 1 chapter than 80% of novels here, the character’s names could use some work, and the world background is kind of blend due to the fact that it is set in the modern world. Anyhow, funny story, love to read more 4/5