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Charbo723
Charbo723Lv34yr
2020-06-29 11:25

This story is really good and I love it... Idk what else to say about it so I’m just gonna leave this smiley face :)

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Charbo723
Charbo723Lv3

Also take all of my power stones that I get from now on

Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

I just saw this right now so yeah. Also thank you for all the power stone. :P

Charbo723:Also take all of my power stones that I get from now on
Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

Power stones*

Dark_light:I just saw this right now so yeah. Also thank you for all the power stone. :P
Charbo723
Charbo723Lv3

Np, you deserve it, I love the story and it’s the least I could do :)

Dark_light:I just saw this right now so yeah. Also thank you for all the power stone. :P
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

what does the sin of sorrow do? ex: gluttony makes person hungry for anything like food, power, etc...so what does sin of depression do? ...meaning person wallows in sadness unable to do anything? just sad all the time?

Dark_light:Power stones*
Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

No it makes them have extreme emotions that are very hard to control.

amaturewriter:what does the sin of sorrow do? ex: gluttony makes person hungry for anything like food, power, etc...so what does sin of depression do? ...meaning person wallows in sadness unable to do anything? just sad all the time?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

thats it or more? cause the sin of wrath or lust or greed or pride? cause its a passive effect with those sins [others too but these 4 are more easily awakened, or are more less always active]

Dark_light:No it makes them have extreme emotions that are very hard to control.
Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

I don't what to ruin it but let's just say there is something that happens when she loses control of her emotions.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

cool

Dark_light:I don't what to ruin it but let's just say there is something that happens when she loses control of her emotions.
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

Mc is famele?

Dark_light:I don't what to ruin it but let's just say there is something that happens when she loses control of her emotions.
Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

do you mean female? if so then yes

Kurigohan:Mc is famele?
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

Ah sorry typo, yup i mean female

Dark_light:do you mean female? if so then yes
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

romance? if so then what kind fxm fxf.

Dark_light:do you mean female? if so then yes
Dark_light
Dark_lightAuthor

I have not decided if I am going to have romances. But if i do then it will probably be fxf.

Valhalla123:romance? if so then what kind fxm fxf.
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

good.

Dark_light:I have not decided if I am going to have romances. But if i do then it will probably be fxf.
AurelLor
AurelLorLv5

Then it will be better to add yuri tag to the story . It will be easier for yuri fans ( like me ) to find the story.

Dark_light:I have not decided if I am going to have romances. But if i do then it will probably be fxf.
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