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So the Mc dies young, he was 16-17 years old. God tells him it was his time to die and was not killed by mistake by god, but god reads his mind and thought the anime worlds were cool so he decided to put them all together in this massive universe filled with strong beings, then sent the Mc to that world after giving him a system and allowing him to pick his race. He of course, picked to be born as a Saiyin. It starts of relatively okay, he was born on earth. He has a mom and a dad. His saiyin mom is actually his mom from the Mc's past life that died and was reborn in to the multiverse. There's a huge time skip till he is 17 years old with a battle power of 25,000. The first people he interacts in this world are the people from HDxD. There are people that spy on him and Mc has no fucking clue which did annoy me. The author does kill off his mother, probably to motivate the MC for what ever reason even though he's a reincarnated person with a second chance that is also a saiyin that love to fight and get stronger. So i don't know why he would need something to motivate him to get stronger. He does bringer her back to life using the Dragon balls. So a great way to make him waste a wish by killing off his mother and forcing him to wish her back. But it was a Bs chapter because it felt super forced to have the Mc witness his mothers death. Felt like those super cliche scenes in movies when the kids witnesses one of there parents death. He's gonna fu*king turn in to batman now. But hey nothing really changes when it comes to him being a real saiyin. Since he does get married, But only uses her as a way to get his dik wet. Then he runs off to train only to do it all over again. So the universe and earth are filled with tons of strong people from different anime's. Even though some of them don't make sense why they are there since there world are in different timelines then a modern earth, one of them being Naruto. Like it would make sense if the author made it so that only some of the anime characters from the Naruto world came over. And he had the Hidden Villages be some sort of secret organization of ninjas, since it would fit more then bringing everyone in the Naruto world in, but he does not. The Naruto world is not small at all. So i don't know how you can keep there same plot going in the modern world. For gods sake, Narutos village is only 3 hours away from Kuoh Town. I have no idea how it's still hidden with so many strong people around. But as you read you end up realizing that it was sort of a forced placement by the author since he wanted to use narutos clone jutsu. Now If you are coming in to this novel expecting the Battle power to be the same as the DBZ universe, don't. You will only become confused and annoyed by trying to wonder why someone low ranking devil from the dxd world has a high amount of Bp. I don't know why the author decided to change the Bp. I wish he would have used the DBZ Bp as a base to show how strong people are, but instead he changes the Bp to be something that's super fking confusing to understand because it seems to change depending on the race. It's like going to math class after studding for along time thinking you know all the answers. But you get a 0 because the teacher decided that 2+2 does not =4 anymore, and he made it so 2+2 now =222. So don't read while using common sense cuz you will have a bad time. I think every race has a different Bp? other then Saiyins, since it seems like his Bp is similar to the DBZ anime. I'm telling you this Battle power **** is allover the place in this story. For example The Mc helps Naruto when the war happens and he helps take out Madara. At the time the Mc has about 3.4mill Bp, when Madara has about 3Mill. And at the same time I believe Naruto is around the same or close to the same as Madara. Since Neji used his byakugan to see The Mc's strength, and mentions that he gives off the same filling Naruto gives off power wise. So don't know how even Madara or Naruto are still close to his strength but whatever. I tried to stop thinking about the Bp or even his stats and how his % on his saiyin blood line worked cuz it would make my head hurt thinking about it. After the war ends and he helps defeat trihexa he goes to the One piece world, that's in a different planet on another galaxy. As soon as this arc starts The story takes an even more boring path. I was already struggling to read the story before this, but now it was a no go so i skimmed threw it. He arrived in the one piece world 8 years before the cannon started he ends up getting another wife, mean while his other wife back on earth has spent 8 years thinking her loved one is dead, and so do his friends. But in reality he is having a good time banging some other girl he made his wife. This novel has allot of issues, but even so i was enjoying it when i turned by brain off and just mindlessly read. Till the one piece part cuz he decided to just crew up with the straw hat gang and follow the cannon. Mean while his wife back on earth still thinks he's dead.

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Multiverse System in the Real World Dropped (Up to Adopt)

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This is more or less a whole story summary rather than a review, but I got a chuckle reading it. Also, there are a few things you got wrong. MC's mother is a parallel version of him mother from his past life, and not his mother from his past life that had also been reincarnated. As for the BP settings, only those who practice Ki control can use DBZ BP logic, but how Soren senses it is like a MP guage or a Chakra guage making their BP a fixed container, if you are still confused you can read the chapter that explained it before the start of the book. Also, Neji can see both Naruto and Kurama's Chakra and it's just about as big as Soren's Ki, so that's why they feel similar. And Madara has more battle experience than both Naruto and Soren, so it's obvious that he would be strong. As for the whole leaving Rias behind, I did it for 2 reasons, first being that Rias would want to come along, and I don't want her to travel with Soren everywhere. And second, I wanted Soren to focus on getting stronger rather than relationships, as most of Soren's wives will just seem to be Oniholes for Soren's use to satisfy reader's perverted minds. Thank you for the honest review