Was able to finish 4 chapters. It is an interesting story. Less the typo errors and the changing perspectives with not much notifications, the development of the story is good and it's like nothing is new for the character's life with her upbringing, given the resignation and acceptance in her life's changes like that. I'll read the other chapters soon. So far, this is good. Just try to proofread it again and be mindful with the changing of perspectives. On my case, I do chanhe POV's and try to go back with the things I wrote to check.
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