Author, I think u should rewrite the book. I tried reading it and it was so confusing. I endured it for a couple more chapters, because the book had potential and was interesting, but, alas, I can no longer endure it.
Purple_Midnight
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LIKEThanks for the feedback, how wonderful would it be if this book could be restarted, but the moment I reached 30 chapters, I decided not to rewrite the book. The first few chapters(20 chaps) can be re-written, but currently, my schedule is tight, so whatever spare time I have will be used to rewrite the said chapters. I speak as a fellow reader now, what chapter did you reach?
I see, my thoughts on the first twenty chapter are simple. To me, those chapters mean nothing, they are unstable bases which the foundation cannot be laid on, that is why I rushed through it, it was also why I did not introduce a labelled and detailed power system suited to the earthlings, as you see, I only mentioned the energies used and cultivating them, I didn't use any levelling system for it. The Fantasy Universe is the base, I used their power system and completely dropped the first two energies, this shows that you cannot take the first 20 chapters seriously, whether improved or not. The first 20 chapters are not the base, but if you refuse to try it again from where you left off, that's up to you.
Purple_Khaos:I reached chapter 15