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borqueh
borquehLv124yr
2020-10-27 11:16

Hi, I'm not a professional at giving summaries of stories created from the author's imagination, but ... I'll try my best. I have already read all the chapters to date. (27-10-2020) First of all, I want to give my sincere compliments on the story in its early days. Since I started reading it, it caught my attention, it caught my attention from the second I finished the first chapter, I insisted on reading until without realizing it ... I finished reading everything. I like the way you (the author) combine the science of the world with imagination. All the chapters have logic and each word makes sense, this is a plus since in other novels that I have read this factor is not found. The second is about the way you mention the government in history, each person in the government has their own identity, there are chapters in which you mention Chilean, Venezuelan, Colombian officials, etc. And that's something I love to be honest with you. Comparing it with other novels that I have read is incredible, since in these it simply mentions the name and rank of such a soldier. Third, grammar. Although you write in Portuguese and then translate into English, everything is perfectly understood, although some words when translating do not make sense, if you reread the paragraph, everything will be understood. And that I can tell you so far, I repeat, I am not a professional in this and I am only giving my most honest opinion. I hope they continue with the novel, although this one does not have as much support as the others, I will always read it, every chapter. <3

The Great Aurora

ILuxTenebris
4.7
69 Chs

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ILuxTenebris
ILuxTenebrisAuthor

Thank you very much for your sincere review, I really need the opinion of others, since I think this is essential for the growth of the novel... If you see any flaws in the story, please don't hesitate to point it out.

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borqueh
borquehLv12

For now I do not see any problem, just continue with the chapters e-e

ILuxTenebris:Thank you very much for your sincere review, I really need the opinion of others, since I think this is essential for the growth of the novel... If you see any flaws in the story, please don't hesitate to point it out.
4yr
1
ILuxTenebris
ILuxTenebrisAuthor

These days I have not been well, I had to undergo urgent dental treatment and the pain was very annoying, and when it didn't hurt I couldn't concentrate... But I'm going to post chapters very soon.

borqueh:For now I do not see any problem, just continue with the chapters e-e
4yr
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borqueh
borquehLv12

Take care, health comes first. Anyway I will be attentive. <3

ILuxTenebris:These days I have not been well, I had to undergo urgent dental treatment and the pain was very annoying, and when it didn't hurt I couldn't concentrate... But I'm going to post chapters very soon.
4yr
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