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Review Detail of Jubysleua in Heaven's Gambit [BL]

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Jubysleua
JubysleuaLv103yrJubysleua

I was fascinated by this novel from the beginning. The whole world is described with incredible detail and love, especially the sceneries, which are simply fantastic. You can easily imagine the most diverse situations and regions, despite how unrealistic they seem to be. Regarding the characters, I think the author has a unique trait since practically all of them (even those only mentioned in a few chapters) are valued and have their traits and development. Although many are annoying or hateful, they've their role and relevance in the story, which makes everything even more interesting. Still on the same topic, I want to give special emphasis to the MC and ML. Their personalities are contrasting and all the interactions are funny. It's beautiful to see their development, despite all the differences, and how they go from "travel companions" to "lovers". About the plot, I think it develops at a steady pace. There aren't big time skips or situations prolonged by hundreds of chapters without development, which allows you to appreciate the evolution of the characters and makes it easier to understand all the mysteries surrounding their world. I don't have a problem with the writing. It's good enough to get a smooth and fluid reading and it's very clear that the author is trying to improve with each chapter. Not to mention that I don't have the right to judge someone's writing with my bad English. In short, the novel is excellent and by far one of my favorites. I recommend it to everyone who likes BL and Xianxia. Besides, the author is very friendly and always interacts with his readers in the comments, which always encourages me to comment again.

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Heaven's Gambit [BL]

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ThirtyTyrants
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Thank you so much for such a kind, and detailed review, I really appreciate your support since the begging of the story, and always look forward to your comments, which are hilarious and always filled with great insight regarding the chapter's events. It's the best thing as an author to have a reader as engaged as you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story, and what other trials and tribulations await Wu Yun and Lan Tian on their road to happy ever after. Thanks again, for taking your time to write such a comprehensive review, and I'm glad you don't mind it when I almost spoil the next chapter answering your comments haha. Also, your English is great, you're super fluent, and have every right to judge, mine and everyone else's English.