Review Detail of KCChakry in Alive: Dream World (ON PAUSE)
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The story is a transmigration cliche but has its own twists to it. The MC didn't have any previous memories of the owner of the body she transmigrated into. So she had to figure out everything in this new world and make her life. And that's where I'm kinda disappointed. Because the whole issue was simply swept aside by her stating she lost her memories and a doctor's check which revealed there's nothing wrong with her. And everyone just accepted she lost her memories and moved on. I'm not saying that's bad or anything but... its just too simple and easy. Instead it would've been more interesting to read how she manages everything in a new world without her memories or letting others realize she's not who she is. (Thats just my opinion though.) And on that thought, the concept of the original owner's memories coming back to her makes it a lot interesting and a bit of a mysterious vibe to it. And the premise of seven suitors courting her is a really cool concept. There are no major errors in writing quality except some tense switches here and there; and the narration also goes back and forth between 1st person and 3rd person. Rest is good. All the best.
Alive: Dream World (ON PAUSE)
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Thank you for your honest review! I respect your opinion :) (Just want to share) Actually, in their traditional world, they're not medically-advanced. So, they couldn't find an explanation for the princess' condition. Nothing changed in terms of her appearance or personality, so they believed their precious daughter. Who wouldn't believe her when she doesn't even remember her own name and where she was? But, it doesn't mean that they just accepted it and moved on. As parents, they were still hoping for their daughter to regain her memories and find out what really happened (what caused her to lose her memories). That's also why they didn't let anyone know of her condition. SOON, THEY'LL FIND OUT WHY SHE LOST HER MEMORIES. (My opinion) For me, it's not realistic for her to not say that she lost her memories. Especially in a new world where she doesn't know anything. They'll easily suspect her; she didn't even recognize her childhood friend that she just saw a few months ago. And, she's just a normal girl who doesn't know anything about royalties. THE IMPORTANT REASON IS: I want the female lead to share her problems with her parents, from the very beginning; because she didn't get to do that in her previous life. It's indeed cliché to say that she lost her memories. But, I have my reasons to why her parents and Theo NEEDED to know that. You'll know soon enough, look forward to it!