Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in Alive: Dream World (ON PAUSE)

The characters are pleasant, there is intrigue, but in the first chapters it is only declared, it will probably be revealed in the future. The text block is well written, there are almost no mistakes. Romantic scenes are described. There are some rough edges, the use of a cliché, however, does not spoil the story itself a little. If the author can add to the story, more emotions, experiences, shows the inner world of the characters, then the novel will be brighter, deeper, more exciting than it is now. In general, this is a promising novel, I added it to my library. So far I have read 6 chapters. I hope the author will be able to make his novel even more intriguing than it is now. Overall rating is 4.8 stars.