The premise of this story intrigued me and I thought to give it a try... But getting past the 1st chapter proved impossible! I'm really sorry to say it that frank; but the writing is *so* bad. Cluttered phrases, repetitions, very simplistic vocabulary and a ton of errors; no useful breaks to make it less... Obtrusive and a grammar that hurts at times. Descriptions are simplistic if there at all; Dialoge reads more like a bad play written in high school... Seeing the 4.5 stars rating - does it improve in the later chapters (like, vastly)? Then I'll just struggle through, but if it continues in the current quality...☠️R.I.P. So, help anyone?
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Sadly, it doesn't improve. If anything, it gets worse. It's probably one of the worst novels I've had the misfortune of reading. No character growth, no pacing, anything that even slightly resembles a plot merely exists to make the MC look stronger, the grammar is something that you'd expect from a child, and I'm almost completely convinced that the writer either doesn't know English that well, or used a translator. I'd give this 0 stars if I could.
Welp, that sounds bleak (and my condolences for your agony) 😓 thanks for answering - and glad I'm apparently not reading something else... You'd think so judging by the other reviews x_x
Daniel_Cowan_9554:Sadly, it doesn't improve. If anything, it gets worse. It's probably one of the worst novels I've had the misfortune of reading. No character growth, no pacing, anything that even slightly resembles a plot merely exists to make the MC look stronger, the grammar is something that you'd expect from a child, and I'm almost completely convinced that the writer either doesn't know English that well, or used a translator. I'd give this 0 stars if I could.
I dunno, other reviewers might enjoy the kind of story where you can just zone out and enjoy a simplistic story that requires almost no intelligence to understand. Our standards could be different, I won't say they're wrong for enjoying this story, I'm just calling it how I see it, using my own standards as a baseline
Nazarach:Welp, that sounds bleak (and my condolences for your agony) 😓 thanks for answering - and glad I'm apparently not reading something else... You'd think so judging by the other reviews x_x
Understandable, I do enjoy 'normal' cliché filled stories from time to time as well - but if even easy/simplistic phrases in a novel are a pain to read, meanings not being well transmitted and no imaginery cause of butchered sentences I'd say enjoyment is rather difficult...
Daniel_Cowan_9554:I dunno, other reviewers might enjoy the kind of story where you can just zone out and enjoy a simplistic story that requires almost no intelligence to understand. Our standards could be different, I won't say they're wrong for enjoying this story, I'm just calling it how I see it, using my own standards as a baseline
