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RationalMind
RationalMindLv44yr
2020-06-24 19:53

Good enough. And Grammer is also good. No eye watering and headache inducing English here. I hope the author continues the story and also cross-posts on other sites (especially ffn).

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DrHungr3y
DrHungr3yLv5

God I thought this was something great because of the rankings but too bad I was quickly dissapointed. Hmmm, let me see where should I start, ok First is the MC -the author didn't explain anything about the mc or wrote about the mc. Like how did the mc get reincarnated or transmigated to stsr wars. Like who he is before and after transmigating or reincarnating in star wars. Like how did he know anything about star wars. Like how did he get a system. Like why did he get chosen by the system. Like why is he a jedi in training. And I can tell you the mc is extremely idiotic just like the one that wrote it. You get what I mean, the author doesnt explain shts. Second is the system -the system is a fcking trash and a fcking scam. I cant even begin how much of a bullsht the system is, there are a few if not most readers will agree with me(if they arent on the authors side)that the system is just bull**** and useless(just a littlr useless) Third is Yodas speech -god I dont know wtfs wrong with the author on this one he just cut a sentece in half and put the first part in the last part for example, FROM you are chosen by mr. Jedi INTO by mr. Jedi you are chosen god yoda doesnt speak like that I really dont know if the author has watched, read or atleast played star wars. Forth is MCs choice -I quite like how he dealth with the situation of the temple thats a + for me and then he upgraded his lightsaber skills so he cant atleast feel the force thats another + then he upgraded his force power and he earned telekinesis thats another + but then the mc became trash it said the people are schemers but he'll scheme more than them but he couldnt even use the system wisely in the 3 years of his training he didnt use the points and he keeps upgrading his lightsaber skills instead of upgrading his force. So in conclusion this fanfic isnt worth reading well that is if you're a dumb fck who cant even notice the obvious mistakes here and support the author who isnt doing anything to fix the mistakes the readers are reading which is extremely obvious so us couole of readers are trying to advice him but sadly stubborn fcks like this sht here isnt gonna move up the society like a trash(like me)

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