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TypeFantasyHeart_5657
TypeFantasyHeart_5657Lv13yr
2021-09-01 10:21

I like what i read in this FF. Just don't drop it like the other very similar fanfic of Sekirei which got to chapter 35 or so. My advice is that you try to flesh out more the girls and have them talk more with mc, anything goes with that. This is so that the girls don't feel like just a number in the hârêm and just a background character to fill numbers. I recommend that author sees Sekirei again to flesh out the characters more. It helps out a lot if you see an anime before introducing it. Like, viewing "Sora no Otoshimono" (save ikaros, Nymph and Astrea) before making the MC travel there.

Reincarnated in sekirei

Risus_25_Arck
4.4
217 Chs

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Azazel_69
Azazel_69Lv3

mc is a baby sitter of the original mc from sekirei.I dont care what the old mc is doing focus on your own mc and stop building a harem for the old mc I dont care what happens to him and you let some of the best sekirei go with the old mc.

3yr

Treyon13
Treyon13Lv1

DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.... Also add some comedy =P DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.DONT DROP IT!!!!!!.

3yr
TFH
TFHLv6

i really like Sekirei, so i will give my support for the author in this novel. Hopefully you write some good Rl8 chapters and make it so that the girls are not just numbers but are part of the story. I will add my thoughts about the novel later

3yr
Devil023
Devil023Lv4

Apart from choosing good harem members there is nothing better in this novel. Chapters are really short, New chapters come very late. Everything is moving too fast. Conversation are average, Scenes didnt explained properly ( not even 18+).

2yr
lapis
lapisLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

This fanfic may not have the most original plot or the most excellent grammar, but it just ...doesnt matter. There is just something special about this fic that drags you in. Its such a satisfying, fluffy and fun read that at the end of it all, nothing else is important. The chapter releases are regular and the chapter length is pretty good too although i still reach the end of every chapter and lament that it wasnt long enough. I would highly recommend this if you are tired of all the edgy MCs, Beta cucks, cowards and murder hobos. You won’t be disappointed! For as long as the author keeps up with this work, he will have my support.

3yr
SeijiKageyama
SeijiKageyamaLv4

What I can say about this fanfic is just meh. the plot itself is good enough but everything else is boring. The story lacks a lot of details and is pretty rushed, everyone accepts the harem thing so easily that it seems forced, the action scenes are just meh, and there's no character development.

1mth
LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

Anybody still read this? It was good at the start but being messy after the sekirei arc. Mc got nerfed really bad and there's no character development for him, he was still your everyday Japanese harem-seeking protagonist. The xover is also too much, it just destroyed the whole story. I just dropped it in Isekai smartphone arc, because the plot is just a copy-paste from the anime with some another xover characters

6mth
Treyon_Daren
Treyon_DarenLv1

Sekirei is one of my favorites animes of all times, its just to bad that i was to short. I really liked that you saved some of the girls from their cruel fate.

3yr
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