It's a great story and a breath of fresh air at the same time... I really like your Naruto...He really feels like a real person rather than a manga protagonist... He isn't hopelessly optimistic like in canon where he just forgives everything and everyone immediately but he also isn't too dark where he's just killing everyone left and right, like some stories like to portray him as... Be really feels like a human I can relate to... Bravo I really love the space-time touch that you gave this story... The potential of dimension travel is just immense... Really looking forward to where the story goes. My only complaint for you is that the information provided in each installment (chapter) is not enough... Maybe you can try to write longer chapters? It's just that when chapters are too short, the significance of an individual chapter is greatly reduced...Other than that, it's absolutely phenomenal...
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