Truly an excellent story with great grammar, perfect clarity, superb development and boundless word choice. The narration works simply fantastic, it floats like a butterfly and delivers like a bee. That coupled with the amazingly designed cover picture made by God RISE10 is just, muah! I feel like this fanfic should be even more popular and that the author should always stay popular! I wish the author all the luck and power i can wish.
ONyat
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LIKETrust me, it's very good. Some parts are shaky and may seem too close to Canon, but there are multiple points that diverge from Canon. The grammar is super good which is a plus. All in all, it's good and gets better.
amaturewriter:is it really that great? [ I dropped and forgot ...dropped when kakashi was introduced]