Item: My Empire of Dreams
Rating: 4.6
Author: Kamatis

KamatisLv34yr

2020-06-24 21:03

Sorry for the late review, brother. Something came up. Anyways, your story has an interesting concept and system you won't in other novels, good job, brother😉😉😉. Writing Quality, is not perfect of course!!! But I hate to say it to you that your mistakes is not something that could easily proofread. Proofreading It carelessly would affect the transition of events and damage the story development so far. So I recommend to master grammar then proofreading It yourself. Anyways, this is a nice book you've got here, brother. Keep it up!!!😊😊😊

My Empire of Dreams

RaSi

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Shameless five star review from author. Hope you would enjoy the novel.

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The story is awesome and I want to read more of it. Author please release fast. world building is awesome and I am a big fan of world building novels.

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It's written very well and the plot is a way to different. Reading this novel will surely be one hell of a journey. I am craving for more chapters. Though it's only eight chpts, I am hooked.

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Really great job!! The author created a really good system story and characters, a big world where we learn about the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid heavy cliché in an already overcrowded genre without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.

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I've only read one chapter so far, but damn I am impressed this feels like the system novel I've always wanted!!! The writing quality is top notch and the story is very good!! Keep up the good work author, you've made me a fan!!!

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The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.

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I first read the synopsis and I was suddenly hooked! I read it and oh my I was even more amazed! You have done a good job author! Keep it up!

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