Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in REALITY

The story progresses nicely. There were no perfect book(mine included). I've seen grammar mistakes and sometimes, there were no present punctuations and periods present. But like other authors, no one was perfect. I started like you in the past so keep it up and continue your work. Use Grammarly to edit your work and it's good to go! I hope you also review mine called Lumia: Other World. Happy reviewing!