Review Detail of Chainslock in REALITY
Review detail
So here’s my review after reading eight chapters. Let’s start with the technicalities: in terms of grammar - there’s little to no errors; pacing - just right. The way of writing is new to me, especially the part where the author narrates as if I am the one in the book — that is an interesting way to write. However I’m still not used to the manuscript type of writing. But that may be preference as well. On the other hand, concept is intriguing, as well as plot. Well-researched also. Characters have depth. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep on writing.
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Thank you for your review. I don't want to sound cliché but your review motivated me. Now I am determined to write the war arc I prepared and it will be explosive. Also, I wanted to update my review but I was unable to do that due to online classes. The story in Searching for Andromeda It feels like it can be adapted into a great anime. I am a bit jealous because no one told me our galaxy will end sooner and here a non-cliché THANK YOU for providing this information. Have a nice day ☺ 👍.
I’m not sure, but you should write in the way you’re most comfortable in! ^^ and I’m glad the review motivated you, fellow writer! Keep on writing!
Mandeep_Singh_780:I also have a question should I keep this for a general audience or change it?