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H01Y_CR1NG
H01Y_CR1NGLv24yr
2020-12-27 11:43

I find the writing quality subparr no thought or reasoning behind the actions of the characters and the changes the author made and how the butterfly effect will effect the mc, story development is a joke this is a wish fulfillment there is no real story the character design is flawed, all the original characters have a major personality change for no reason but "another one for the harem" update stability is abissmal looks like you get maybe 1 chapter a month if the author didn't drop the world background is also a joke doesn't add anything unique or interesting to make this fanfic stand out overall yet another poorly written wish fulfillment with for sure will be dropped before completion, if there was even an end goal, I get the feeling the author is writing this 1 chapter at a time without a planned future direction to go, he'll end up writing himself into a corner or get burned out before chapter 100....

I’m Harry Potter

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CipherStorm
CipherStormLv4

Best Harry Potter fanfiction i ever read awesome hope you continue to update more chapters Please try to update as soon as possible 🙂 Update.............. And thanks for such wonderful story of your really appreciate it man .....

4yr

CipherStorm
CipherStormLv4

hey author it's been almost a month you didn't updated any chapters please man update more chapters it's good fanfic I hope you do don't drop it

4yr
dowhatver_555
dowhatver_555Lv14

The best hp story I've read in a while hope u keep going 🙏🙏🙏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Dark_Sorcerer
Dark_SorcererLv10

This is a typical cliché story in which the MC is reincarnated as Harry Potter and is super powerful, handsome and even the Heir of the Pendragon House, that is, the rightful heir to the magical throne. On another note, there are lots of spelling mistakes and sentences that don't make sense - which can be very annoying. Overall, it's full of clichés and boring, as there is no sense of suspense or adventure.

4yr
Just_ForFun
Just_ForFunLv5

Please update regularly if it's not any problem 😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😏😏😏😏😏😏

4yr
97126205
97126205Lv13

This story development is great, I love the intelligence factor the main character portrays. The only concern is the stability of updates, if there was even one chapter a week that be good but no chapters for more than nearly a month. I really hope the author isn't thinking of dropping this light novel.

4yr
Donking_Dead
Donking_DeadLv5

I like the new harry & his influence over granger and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]need more updates please

4yr
Mi_Wa
Mi_WaLv1

So in ch2 you pick right before hagrid shows up and get great muscles nu being to get sick etc.. well thats frankly bs. Its one thing to self insert its another to do this hot garbage

4yr
Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

Interesting start since he set up a good position as lord of potter pendragon and already fixed hermione. But the pacing has some issues and minor grammar stuff/possibly typo idk. Sadly the author stopped updating before the story even took off. Author stopped just a day after house sorting

3mth
Emma_Scheele_7937
Emma_Scheele_7937Lv1

Hello, when you find the time in, what im sure is a very busy, schedule please write another chapter😄 I really like your story and hope to read more♥️♥️

3yr
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