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Review Detail of MILF_lover in Stealing Spree - (Moved to a New Link)

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MILF_lover
MILF_loverLv23yrMILF_lover

Not that great like how others praise it to be. Shitty characters with easily changing narratives and easily manipulated. They don't have any real substance, most of them are part of a herd. The MC is a cluster ****, he himself doesn't know what he/she is and is always making a hill Outta a mole. The writing quality is quite good, although the plots and settings don't do it any justice. The characters are high schoolers and even adults, but they act like 5 year olds who can be easily manipulated with candies. Like, how does a girl who has been in love with someone for years would let some guy **** with zero relative interaction? In conclusion, as a porno/hentai novel it's good but the story is meh

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Stealing Spree - (Moved to a New Link)

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TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4TheFlagGuy

making a mountain out of a mole hill*

KoalaAi
KoalaAiLv5KoalaAi

I'm currently don't have the time to gather the materials from the story to give some counter-opinion to your review, though it might be easier to exchange opinion if you give enough references to your review. I'm afraid it would be unfair to the author and and future reader if I left your review as is The-girl-who-has-been in-love-for-a-long-time, would it be fine to assume that you're referencing Satsuki by that description? As I have said on another of your review there's a reason why their reason stagnated for a long time and made me reluctant to call Satsuki's feeling as love but would rather called them adoration and reliance on Sakuma past deed. When Ruki came that's made their relationship start moving again and I'm glad for Satsuki that it happen when Ruki beside her. I don't want say much about the story here so I only hope it's enough convince and reassure any future reader to give the Author a chance to finish his story. Last review for Satsuki and Sakuma relationship. Their past might not just about two of them, their future might also not only about two of them but the author still leaving a chance for both of them to be happy.

MILF_lover
MILF_loverLv2MILF_lover

The point went above your head. It's not about their past or the future, it's about some random guy with almost zero relative interaction to a girl asking if they could **** so she can gain XP for boss fight, and the girl despite being shy to even show affection for a guy she has been infatuated with for 6 fucking years, agrees easily. That's a hentai logic not good enough for a story. It only adds to the fact that every female character is part of a herd that blindly follows the mc, similar to Chinese xianxias. And this very trick the authors use is what irks me the most, they purposely start out with shitty characters, give them some backstory and boom *character development*.

KoalaAi:I'm currently don't have the time to gather the materials from the story to give some counter-opinion to your review, though it might be easier to exchange opinion if you give enough references to your review. I'm afraid it would be unfair to the author and and future reader if I left your review as is The-girl-who-has-been in-love-for-a-long-time, would it be fine to assume that you're referencing Satsuki by that description? As I have said on another of your review there's a reason why their reason stagnated for a long time and made me reluctant to call Satsuki's feeling as love but would rather called them adoration and reliance on Sakuma past deed. When Ruki came that's made their relationship start moving again and I'm glad for Satsuki that it happen when Ruki beside her. I don't want say much about the story here so I only hope it's enough convince and reassure any future reader to give the Author a chance to finish his story. Last review for Satsuki and Sakuma relationship. Their past might not just about two of them, their future might also not only about two of them but the author still leaving a chance for both of them to be happy.
MILF_lover
MILF_loverLv2MILF_lover

The story qualifies as a good porno novel but the story development is still lackluster compared to how it's being praised. Just because it has too much monologues and edgy MC doesn't mean it's 'great'. It's decent at best and hence a 3.5 or whatever shit I rated it.

MILF_lover
MILF_loverLv2MILF_lover

And it's not just about Satsuki, literally every female character is just too easy.

MILF_lover
MILF_loverLv2MILF_lover

And it's not just about Satsuki, literally every female character is just too easy.

Cjya
CjyaLv2Cjya

Lol. even if you did that irl It still would work. I mean The Author was declaring that The World is ****ed Up. even if you fucking denies all of them. Man... When My mother told me How she met my father, while she still has her boyfriend. She was carefully distancing from her lover. she was around 13 when she had her first boyfriend so basically, they have been together for almost 7 years. but she met my father when she was 19. ever since my mother Met my father. before she even notices it she was already in love with my father. My mother said she saw something to my father she hasn't seen on her boyfriend. which led to falling in love with my father even though it was wrong. and she said, after they all graduate. my mother decided to break up with him. after My mother's boyfriend heard the event. my mother said she can still remember how her boyfriend knelt on the ground begging for her, crying out loud which didn't suit his Handsome features since her boyfriend is so handsome, I saw his picture on my mother's Pandora's Box. Her boyfriend asked her why would they have to break up. and you know what my mother said? It's because She loves my father more than him despite all the years, she has been through with him. I was in rage for at least a week. keep asking my Mother why would she do that? but I couldn't blame them... since if they hadn't met each other, then I wouldn't exist. my Father Cucked him, đŸ˜„

MILF_lover:The point went above your head. It's not about their past or the future, it's about some random guy with almost zero relative interaction to a girl asking if they could **** so she can gain XP for boss fight, and the girl despite being shy to even show affection for a guy she has been infatuated with for 6 fucking years, agrees easily. That's a hentai logic not good enough for a story. It only adds to the fact that every female character is part of a herd that blindly follows the mc, similar to Chinese xianxias. And this very trick the authors use is what irks me the most, they purposely start out with shitty characters, give them some backstory and boom *character development*.