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This one is pretty good. I would recommend giving it a read. The MC is ruthless, he's also cautious. He doesn't **** around. There are some negatives though. The entire wish granting idiocy at the start sucks. Also, I feel like this is a story where the MCs opness works against him. All of his intelligence and cautiousness just feels completely pointless bc he can easily kill/maim everyone. The story would be a lot better if the MC had that awesome devil fruit but nothing else. He'd still be strong as hell but would have obvious weaknesses that would require him to actually use his cunning.
The informant
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No need to apologize bro, we're all casual here. I enjoyed what I read, can't wait for future chapter!
Random_Author:I really enjoy reading reviews like these so Let me get into my reply. - I will admit that the wish-granting part was weak on my side. This is my second time writing so I went something I knew well and familiar with. I should have tried and broadened myself out and went with something new and unique. So I can't defend myself on that one and you're absolutely correct. - Let me clear the weakness for his devil fruit next. There is an over glaring weakness that I will incorporate more into the future. The user of the devil fruit is massively disadvantaged in fights where he's fighting 2 or more opponents on his own. Let me use a scenario for this. Let's say our MC is fighting 2 people. He turns one of their bones to cookies. Once his attention is on someone else the effect of it disappears and he is susceptible to an attack from the back. I should have absolutely shown this more in the fight with Sengoku and Hermes so I apologise for that. - Now the MCs cautiousness is something that is a mental thing. From the way he died in his past life he is scared and afraid of betrayal. It's the reason why we haven't seen him really interact with people outside of his own creations and the WG. It's almost like a mild PTSD but I won't get into that right now. Slowly over the period of the story, he will gain alliances and friendships with people outside of his own circle. I hope that clears up a few things and if you have any more questions please ask and I'll try and reply as soon as possible. I hope you enjoy the future chapters and continue reading this story!
I really enjoy reading reviews like these so Let me get into my reply. - I will admit that the wish-granting part was weak on my side. This is my second time writing so I went something I knew well and familiar with. I should have tried and broadened myself out and went with something new and unique. So I can't defend myself on that one and you're absolutely correct. - Let me clear the weakness for his devil fruit next. There is an over glaring weakness that I will incorporate more into the future. The user of the devil fruit is massively disadvantaged in fights where he's fighting 2 or more opponents on his own. Let me use a scenario for this. Let's say our MC is fighting 2 people. He turns one of their bones to cookies. Once his attention is on someone else the effect of it disappears and he is susceptible to an attack from the back. I should have absolutely shown this more in the fight with Sengoku and Hermes so I apologise for that. - Now the MCs cautiousness is something that is a mental thing. From the way he died in his past life he is scared and afraid of betrayal. It's the reason why we haven't seen him really interact with people outside of his own creations and the WG. It's almost like a mild PTSD but I won't get into that right now. Slowly over the period of the story, he will gain alliances and friendships with people outside of his own circle. I hope that clears up a few things and if you have any more questions please ask and I'll try and reply as soon as possible. I hope you enjoy the future chapters and continue reading this story!