webnovel
Lukeskydrinker
LukeskydrinkerLv104yr
2020-06-12 18:05

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..................,..........................................................................................(┛ಸ_ಸ)┛彡┻━┻(┛ಸ_ಸ)┛彡┻━┻(┛ಸ_ಸ)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻(┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻.........

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Valixiant
ValixiantLv2

Alrighty, this is a solid meh for me. The idea was pretty good, I've seen a few others that are similar but I think this one is better. However, it does have some problems. The main problem this novel has is how ridiculously slow it is. The story surrounding the first two wielders were okay, but once the main character found the third wielder it became super slow. I'm skimming the novel and I still find it excruciatingly slow. Ten or so chapters can go by and nothing really important will happen. Meaningless fights are several chapters long. Arguably the worst part is the POV changes. Theres so many problems with that. Other people's POV lasts so long. Furthermore, upon switching POV's, it will essentially just be repeating events that already happened from a different POV before continuing. Story development is meh. Story takes far too long for anything meaningful to happen. They foreshadow various things, but so far haven't capitalized on anything. As for the characters? Average at best. No matter how many skills the main character gets, it never really feels like hes improving. Side characters are meh. Theres nothing particularly interesting about any of them. The main character's students are average, if not 2d. Once again, I'd just like to point out how much exposition dumping and meaningless filler is included in this novel. Usually, most novels would stop exposition dumping at the start, but this novel never really does. It constantly re-explains stuff, to the point of it be repetitive. Overall, too slow to be enjoyable, especially considering this is a action novel. Fights are boring and almost all of them feel like filler. Everything else is average or below-average.

Related Stories

Reincarnated To Evolve My Bee Empire

"Now, go forth, my mortal champion! Conquer this world—or else!" I lived a painfully average life and died by a stupid, stupid accident, but a goddess interfered, giving me a second chance in another world. There, I became royalty—the lazy kind with almost no obligations, free to live in peace and luxury for the rest of my days. Sounds like a dream, right? In reality, it was anything but—because I became *BEE* royalty. A Drone Bee, doomed to die of old age in 2 months! (A humanoid bee, thankfully, but still a bee in all the ways that matter.) The only way to increase my lifespan is to develop and grow my bee colony—a deadly task in a vicious world like this one. There are murderous insect monsters, colossal beasts trampling the earth, other civilizations, natural disasters, and the bitchy patron goddess who absolutely hates me. But as long as I have my brains, my bees, and the powerful genes my system gives me, my Bee Empire will be unstoppable! === For those who want to know more: This is a wholesome comedic story, but it has some dark moments. The focus is on kingdom building, survival as an empire, and interacting with MC’s beautiful bee wife and adorable bee daughters. The bees are all humanoid (see pictures) and human-sized. However, they are still bees in their ways of life and mentality. Although there’s a system, real growth comes from putting effort and time. Nothing happens in an instant in this story, unless it’s trouble. MC acts like an idiot sometimes (oftentimes), but he’s not actually stupid-stupid. When it comes to strategic decisions, he uses logic and reason. Even if you might disagree with it. Also, there will be no smut (ecchi is a fair game), incest, NTR, harem or BL. === Discord is up! Find it at -> https://linktr.ee/Garessta Updates: 2 chapters/day, right after the reset (with a 5% chance of running late). Reply to author's pinned review if you have questions. Also, although I realize the futility of this aim (at least right now), if this novel reaches top 15 golden ticket ranking (and stays there for a few days, obv), I will mass release 10 extra chapters! (within 30 calendar days)

Garessta · Fantasy
4.9
272 Chs