Review Detail of LinShui in Standing Right Next To You

I like that the story is told from both point of views, both ML and FL. I also like the little inserts from the author in the midst of the story. FL doesn't seem to be a damsel in distress type of a character, which is very refreshing as I believe we need more self-made and strong FL in contemporary romances. I think it was hilarious how the ML was so bothered by being called a creep. :D Here I will point out a few things that I hope will help the author in the long run. :) The grammar: So far, it is an easy read and quite compelling, I find myself pulled into reading further. Still, the story will need a little bit of proofreading and some editing to make the flow seamless and pleasant. Minor things and very easy to fix. :) Description: I like it, so far quite well described and fun, yet, as I mentioned in the grammar, some editing can really bring out the surroundings and the characters more vividly, and brings the background into life for the reader. To sum it up: I like the flow of the story and how it changes POVs between the leads. It really brings out the different personalities they have and how they may complement each other in the future. The story looks promising and fun with twist and turns. I'm curious on how the relationship will develop between the two leads, and will read on to see how it all turns out. Keep up the good work, author! :)