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2020-07-08 21:28

First of all, the synopsis was very well written. It was not short and not long and put forth the major theme of the story and gave a peek into the personality of the main character. The writing quality is good, i didnt find many mistakes or grammatical errors. But it could do with a little more details to make the readers fully immerse in the scene. The characters are pretty interesting and I like the interactions between Reuben and Assistant Kim, and between Lina and Uncle Pat. And I like that Lina purposefully misleads Lucille and Mandy just to see them shoot themselves in the foot. Overall, its a very fun and interesting read.

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