Quality: it's a Chinese MTNL translation,... need I say anymore...make my eye look like I had overcharge sharingan. Character: he himself thinks he is smart only to be a stupid naive, goody two shoes with wuxia MC personality. update: the speed of the update is astonishing...(5 star) but I wish writer had just focused on redoing the work and just concentrated on quality rather then quantity. world: the background of world visited are all mixed up for MC's convenience...so leaves a huge gap of plot holes... p.s: I don't think the writer has any idea about some of the worlds and characters as they are out of character plus has their moods all over the place with no control over their emotion. pps: the premise of the story was good but actual work lacks contents and detail and really need grammertical corrections plus with research on the world MC is in and characters he is interacting with.
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LIKEWiMaiRi:Lol, your eyes became this means that my Gramm was really another dimension power... But just wanted 2 ask... have you read my first review... you probably read only the first 15- chap... right?