Review Detail of FlowerOfEternity in Apocalypse : Copy Master

Writing Quality (2/5): At times it's decent and at times it's absolutely horrendous. However, the author has told us, the readers, that English is not their main language. (Mine isn't as well) Stability of Updates (5/5): Extremely good at the moment. A chapter a day. Story Development (4/5): The story development is pretty good since you get to follow Gray through his journey in gaining power. However, at times, I'm still extremely confused as to how strong Gray actually is. It seems he's extremely strong at one moment, and then at the other, he's pretty weak. Character Design (4/5): Pretty good. World Background (3/5): It's a nice idea that Gray wants to become stronger to regain the "city," his father left for him. But I'm having a hard time understanding what that city's name is? Is it Glory City? If the grammar and punctuation were better, I'd given it an overall rating of 4/5, but man...it really kills the story. If the author reads this, a tip would be to use the application Grammarly, since it's free and it would improve your writing a lot.