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ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv54yr
2020-08-10 13:46

At chapter 21. This novel is toooooo slow pace for me - even if there were mentioning of the start being slow pace. There is nothing that’s really captivating, wowing or comical to keep the readers attention of wanting more. It’s really vanilla.

A Web of Magic

Draksage
4.7
100 Chs

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DreamyFog
DreamyFogLv14

Thx i hate slow paced stuff, saved some of my useless time!

1yr
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Daiost_Chan
Daiost_ChanLv4

A really good story so far a couple of chapters out so far for a good binge read. The system is thankfully not abuse and overbearing with stats that require their own story page like so many other stories that us the system. Flaws so far is the lack of never ending chapters. :D

4yr

Shane54200
Shane54200Lv5

The best Harry Potter fanfic. Especially the system is well thought out and is perfect for the world like Harry Potter. And it neither make the characters too Op nor nerfed them..

4yr
Aedan
AedanLv6

Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC

3yr
PommyJosh
PommyJoshLv11

A very well written novel that takes under explored parts of the Harry Potter Universe to tell an engaging story. There are few mistakes and most parts are well explained and keep you reading for more. There is actually a system and game like elements, but fear not, they are not over powering like you see in some other novels (There is a good balance and I think it fits well). I would definitely recommend you give it a try.

4yr
ILuxTenebris
ILuxTenebrisLv10

Melhor fanfic de HP que eu li na minha vida, não pare de escrever!! Você tem grande talentos e com certeza continuará surpreendendo aos leitores.

4yr
Kilian
KilianLv12

This story is well thought out and written. The main character is an original character but not a self insert. The author takes the time to build his world carefully and that is certainly appreciated. The most interesting part of the story is the divination talent of the main character and the introduction of a soft-system. The system offers an advantage to the main character but certainly does not make him overpowered. Overall, I am very satisfied with this Harry Potter fanfic and will continue to read it.

4yr
Neelthakur
NeelthakurLv4

Excellent! thanks for writing this piece of art. ...............................................................................................................................................

4yr
SloAngel
SloAngelLv6

Good start , i like the idea, am looking to next chapters and good luck :) ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

4yr
MaouSystem
MaouSystemLv14

the system is perfect for the Harry Potter world. it's one of the best fanfiction that I have read. I like how the mc is more geared toward a supporting role instead of going down the typical overpowered attack route.

4yr
ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there.

4yr
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