Review Detail of romance_addict in Transmigration For a New Life

I could barely get through the first chapter, and in chapter 2, I decided that I couldn’t continue. I started reading since the summary sounded interesting, but the chapters are so full of errors that I couldn’t read story smoothly. The author does mention that English is not her first language though. There are a lot of sentences that are long and should be broken up, and each sentence felt more like I was reading a summary than a story. Those areas could have been used to showcase the character’s personality, provide more of an explanation between the sequence of events, and bring more depth to the story. Instesd, multiple pieces of information were bunched up together in one long sentence. It was giving me a headache and I kept stopping to try and make it make sense and correct errors. This story might have potential, but I can’t tell with all the errors.