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Search4Evil
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This is my honest review. Writing quality deserves 4 stars. Update, well the latest update is after a month. So what can I expect? Story development, well the author has created a shi t with butter. I mean story looks good but doesn't have logical explanations and a proper plot. Character design, mc is contradictory in nature. You can say that he is a hypocrite. But the way the author has written it, I get the feeling that the author just messed up. The author failed in portraying it perfectly. World background, well the world is marvel world with Xmen comic world mix. But the author has messed up the ranking system or more like the comic is a big mess of illogical explanations and unexplained rankings. So the author has just taken the wrong road for his writing by choosing comics as a plot base. --------------------------------------------------- There are too many mistakes in this novel. Sometimes the author just gives some unnecessary explanations and sometimes he completely omits them which makes it look bad. MC's personality has a fault and he can't control it. According to the description and depth of plot that the author has portrayed in his novel. Sometimes mc's personality just doesn't match, what it is and what it should look like. [ Exp. when he allows rape, killing of innocent and then suddenly he started finding reasons for justifying himself then again suddenly in next chp mc started feeling guilty and then he becomes excited by killing and he is cold-blooded indeed. ] MC reasons for saving people just don't make sense to me. MC was a 20 yr old person [ at least ] since in this life he suddenly becomes the best person with a high IQ like tony stark and a genius minded businessman then this means that he is smart and his evil nature shows us that he is strong mentally but then suddenly he breaks down. I mean WTF? ---------------- He loves someone, burns them to ashes when he knows that he can resurrect them in the future with his own hands. [ So mc is pragmatic ].....But no, mc in the future started feeling guilt, and then suddenly a need to justify himself arise. I mean WTF???? again and again this person is doing.

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Marvel: Exilir Rise of the Mutant empire

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Search4Evil
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My best advice to the author is that if he writes a new novel in the future. I mean if. Then he should write a novel with a good power system and if in that world rankings are similarly messed up then he should change them. After all comic is a comic, you can show that a comic can't completely display or tell what should be the future of a world. It can just give a few hints to it. And then people of the earth change and mess them up so that the public can enjoy more. I mean a little logic, even if it is not practical, but still, as long as it looks good while hearing or reading then the author should introduce them. Powers and abilities of a high level should not be available so easily like they are vegetables in a market. OK Raise the difficulty level a bit. Let mc face some difficulties in life even if he is OP. Otherwise what we are even reading here? [ Just don't forget to make him evil as that's what I really like about this novel. Make him like Fang Yuan of reverend Insanity. A pragmatic person with an evil personality and devoid of humanity and morality doing things for his own personal gains to whatever extent is needed. ]

Edgelord666
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man keep reading and you will know that many chapters are bogus to show his failure in the reasearch of x gene. you will get the character development a good power system and all that. I wanted to show some realism. the first 10 to 12 chapters are the chapters that i write just to staisfy me I was not serious at that time. now I am. and I write on phone and it multiply the mistakes.

Search4Evil:My best advice to the author is that if he writes a new novel in the future. I mean if. Then he should write a novel with a good power system and if in that world rankings are similarly messed up then he should change them. After all comic is a comic, you can show that a comic can't completely display or tell what should be the future of a world. It can just give a few hints to it. And then people of the earth change and mess them up so that the public can enjoy more. I mean a little logic, even if it is not practical, but still, as long as it looks good while hearing or reading then the author should introduce them. Powers and abilities of a high level should not be available so easily like they are vegetables in a market. OK Raise the difficulty level a bit. Let mc face some difficulties in life even if he is OP. Otherwise what we are even reading here? [ Just don't forget to make him evil as that's what I really like about this novel. Make him like Fang Yuan of reverend Insanity. A pragmatic person with an evil personality and devoid of humanity and morality doing things for his own personal gains to whatever extent is needed. ]
Edgelord666
Edgelord666AuthorEdgelord666

as for the mc being evil did i tell you his past or things. no don't assume man. You will know his past and all that I will try to not leave any plothole.

Search4Evil:My best advice to the author is that if he writes a new novel in the future. I mean if. Then he should write a novel with a good power system and if in that world rankings are similarly messed up then he should change them. After all comic is a comic, you can show that a comic can't completely display or tell what should be the future of a world. It can just give a few hints to it. And then people of the earth change and mess them up so that the public can enjoy more. I mean a little logic, even if it is not practical, but still, as long as it looks good while hearing or reading then the author should introduce them. Powers and abilities of a high level should not be available so easily like they are vegetables in a market. OK Raise the difficulty level a bit. Let mc face some difficulties in life even if he is OP. Otherwise what we are even reading here? [ Just don't forget to make him evil as that's what I really like about this novel. Make him like Fang Yuan of reverend Insanity. A pragmatic person with an evil personality and devoid of humanity and morality doing things for his own personal gains to whatever extent is needed. ]
Kurdi123
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Hahah Writing Trash and hoping that people torture themself continue reading just because you said so, you are a Trash Author. Instead of taking this extremely long Rewiew to heart you just seek excuses

Edgelord666:as for the mc being evil did i tell you his past or things. no don't assume man. You will know his past and all that I will try to not leave any plothole.