Frankly, the MC is lowest scum. I mean stealing the money even from Nami. Man, it's like he's not the least affected by her backstory. There is also his twisted personality like how can he kill all the Marines he meets. Not all of them are like Akainu, Nizumi and the others. There are people like Garp, Koby and many good guys too. It's like this story made the Marines look even more bad. I'm not a big fan of Marines and I even hate them but we must address the fact that thanks to them, the whole one piece world and pirates like luffy, shanks or Whitebeard are very rare. That's why I'm saying that this novel that makes "all Marine bad" is very wrong. Now coming to the MC personality. Frankly, at first I didn't hate it much but as the chapters went on, he became more and more a scum of a pirate like those we hate from one piece or pirates of the Caribbean. Even Jack Sparrow wasn't as bad as this guy. The only thing I seemed to have liked about this novel is giving him the dark fruit and fire fruit which is a good thing for me. What's concerning me is that he has done all of this without even being influenced by the fruit, if he gets more evil then one piece world will get completely destroyed. In the end, I give the fanfic a 5/10 for idea originality and given abilities but the MC personality is like scum and the image this novel is giving for Marines is way darker than even the manga or other novels.
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