Only negative about the novel is the way the author makes him “help” his best friend with assignments no ones reading this to see if the character can get top marks. We read it for the R18 tag and the action. Character development should focus on MC and his love interests after all sooner or later his best friend will either end up dead or written out because he cant keep up with MCs strength. I’ll be honest Im disappointed with the updates because this week it was all “POV” updates and honestly I couldnt care less. Feels like the Authors just using filler material to boost updates. Can you atleast put it in Chronological order so theres some form of structured plot...
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