The writing quality is not bad here... It's easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Though some aspects are confusing... It's a good read overall. The story development is good IMO... I like this aspect of the story... like how the progress is smooth. The characters are designed well, even the side characters... though a little more description is needed. /me screams I HATE THAT FAT BULLY Yes, the world background is good. The sorroundings are described well. There could be more desctiption on the overall world... but then the story has just began.
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