Not bad. For more explanation, mc is way, way too OP. Nearing the levels of marvels cosmic aspects, that Death and infinity even talk to him and tell him to not fuk up the universe. Moreover, I don't see any plot nor what is the actual desire of the protagonist. For some reason, he desires to be self-proclaimed earth protector' or whatever. Moreover, the amount of stuff he does in the marvel world before the key modern events would create huge butterfly events, but I guess the author's plot time 'hacks' will fix those.
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