The writing quality is great, and each chapter is lengthy. The start of the story portrays a much better version of Naruto and a more decisive MC. The rest of the characters are introduced differently and complex. The story would have been great But there are major points that need to be noted before. 1 - The character of naruto reverts back and is disappointing, especially when he met Kanji. The meek behaviour was terrible and quit-worthy. 2 - There is Netorare... One of the tailed beasts turned human (woman) who was going to be his turns to a ho. While the fact not everyone wants to be with him ok. She shows the seed of others to him and he does not care. (Some might be interested but SOMETHING THAT MADE THE STORY SHIT FOR ME) 3 - Authors gives Kiba a harem too for no reason whatsoever and the members are possible people that were going to be his and long chapters dedicated to him. (Author - Forgot who the MC is maybe) 4 - A man's body changed to a woman then naruto shoves a piece of his soul and turns the man who is him into his new lover. (He Fs himself with a body that was male originally.) Reading the first few chapters is good especially with better writing quality. But the plot is something that takes a turn for the worst, he turns to beta-ish character, with natorare accepting mentality. This is not for me and everyone needs these warnings before going into the story. π€’π€’π€’π€’ Such waste of a good Fanfic.
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Sometimes I think people don't understand the true meaning of making a harem for the MC, but you my bro, you do!
