Item: 0008000X00008000
Rating: 2.2
Author: Jasonenrick

JasonenrickLv144yr

2020-06-15 20:15

Srry, can't give ya more ! The Mc is a roboter with a blank memory card in my opinion, lul. The writing quality is so bad and terrible, the Author doesn't even know how to write proper sentences! The story itself is blank as well. I am not motivated enough to write more and waste more of my precious time to write a good Review, the Novel doesn't deserve it . May sound harsh but that's life for ya !

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Anas_Nazim

4.5

1 Chs

Liked by 13 people

Replies7

JasonenrickLv14

The only reason it has 2.2 Stars is because the Update Stability is 5-Stars, can't say anything against it!

4yr

Anas_NazimAuthor

Thanks, I will try to improve my writing.

4yr

JasonenrickLv14

Try writing long sentences and not smth like this .... He died. I couldn't do anything. I went to the House. I opened the door. I went to the chair etc etc. Make your Story more fluently, make sentences that are flexible and differ from the words you used before, to not repeat sentences. That would make your Story less monotonous. If you understand what I mean that is .......

Anas_Nazim:Thanks, I will try to improve my writing.

4yr

Anas_NazimAuthor

Thanks, I will try. 😊

Jasonenrick:Try writing long sentences and not smth like this .... He died. I couldn't do anything. I went to the House. I opened the door. I went to the chair etc etc. Make your Story more fluently, make sentences that are flexible and differ from the words you used before, to not repeat sentences. That would make your Story less monotonous. If you understand what I mean that is .......

4yr

Demiurge_OharaLv12

Download Grammarly and Learn a bit English. While grammarly is helpful especially in Minor sentences, Grammars and spellings. You still have to do your part. Trust me. Read my newer stories. You'll see its effectiveness. And English is my 3rd language.

Anas_Nazim:Thanks, I will try. 😊

4yr

amaturewriterLv4

mixed parents? Economic Odyssey...dropped?

Demiurge_Ohara:Download Grammarly and Learn a bit English. While grammarly is helpful especially in Minor sentences, Grammars and spellings. You still have to do your part. Trust me. Read my newer stories. You'll see its effectiveness. And English is my 3rd language.

4yr

Demiurge_OharaLv12

more or least, I didn't have the motivation or time like I was young. Senior high is a bit hard here since apparently I need to Re-learn all of the math formulas and get an average 90 to pass. burn out sucks.

amaturewriter:mixed parents? Economic Odyssey...dropped?

4yr

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