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Alaheeza
AlaheezaLv44yr
2020-06-08 01:52

This is the review based on first three chapters! Well, the male lead appears to be interesting and he is not cold or rude like other Webnovel male leads, which makes the story out of the box and interesting. So far the story and character appeared to be realistic and I love how crisp and yet well articulated the descriptions are! Waiting for more chapters! Keep up the good work!

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Sira_08
Sira_08Author

Coming from an author like you, I feel honoured if not inspired by your novels I would have never thought about writing.. Thank you soo much.❀️ And I'll work on the chapters more. Keep supporting me Ma'am 🧑🧑

Alaheeza
AlaheezaLv4

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Sira_08:Coming from an author like you, I feel honoured if not inspired by your novels I would have never thought about writing.. Thank you soo much.❀️ And I'll work on the chapters more. Keep supporting me Ma'am 🧑🧑
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

question....is ur story about a sad broken/betrayed/raped, etc FL and similarly Sad ML finding each other and the ML getting the girl, or is it about 2 lovers that separated but met after a few yrs to rebuild a relationship, or is this just a story with 2 lovers and their relationship without the cliche ****?

Sira_08:Coming from an author like you, I feel honoured if not inspired by your novels I would have never thought about writing.. Thank you soo much.❀️ And I'll work on the chapters more. Keep supporting me Ma'am 🧑🧑
Sira_08
Sira_08Author

Your 3rd option suits well to my story. I'll add more spices to it so give it a try!

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