Review Detail of AlphaHost in Fate/Doom

Item: Fate/Doom
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

AlphaHostLv53yrAlphaHost

I'ts a good fan fic, but the grammar is too bad. I't drags the entire novel down. Makes it hard to read and is a huge turn off especially when it makes all the characters sound like 10 year old children trying to use big words. the writer needs to fix his grammar before I can even consider reading more of it.

Fate/Doom

The_High_Father

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The_High_FatherAuthorThe_High_Father

Omg, thank you very much for your complement about how ****ty is my grammar, I can't describe my feeling right now!!!🙃

3yr

AlphaHostLv5AlphaHost

then improve it and stop with the sarcasm, or dont and just ignore what i wrote, up to you.

The_High_Father:Omg, thank you very much for your complement about how ****ty is my grammar, I can't describe my feeling right now!!!🙃

3yr

The_High_FatherAuthorThe_High_Father

I actually like when someone tell me what I need without shouting or arguing, so I was thankful really, not sarcasm

AlphaHost:then improve it and stop with the sarcasm, or dont and just ignore what i wrote, up to you.

3yr