Review Detail of YutaKim in Fate/Doom

Author's grammar is a absolutely worst, i dont know if he used translator. I suggest author should try using Grammarly. But if you can bear with a few bit horrible grammar mistakes, then you should try to read this. The story is quite good, while everything made really simple, like the fight scene is just well yeah not bad. There are a lot of plot holes here and there. MC can literally survive from Gilgamesh if he decided to use all of his points, but he just like "I will save it for later because Medea (his servant) needs a lot of mana to sustain." And in the end, his stupidity cost him the sole reason to save points. And when he did use them, he still save A LOT of points just because he want to gain stat points by training early on. A lot of forced plot for MC, when I said 'forced' yeah its totally forced in a bad way just to make MC got a little, very little character developement. The reason why I gave this story a decent rating, its just because 1. He is in Fateverse, 2. He got Medea, 3. Mc will be strong really fast, 4. Despite a lot of shortcomings from MC personality I still kinda like him because he is not a beta MC.