Review Detail of Umu_9001 in Forbidden Insight

The story is progressing well and is quite good, its still a low star for now as most things havent been clarified yet but it has great potential. Grammer is good and the sentences are not much confusing for a first story which is already a huge plus in this site, cant wait to grt to know our main casts more. Theres lots of things that will be needed for it to become a top story but it definitely deserves it more than the ones this site promotes so cheers and have fun in this story and enjoy the fruit of labor of the author.