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House
HouseLv153yrHouse

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ The biggest problem is the MC. I could barely sit through 10 chapters of this trash. Like I already said the biggest problem is the shitty MC in the first 5 chapters or so he already said he is ****ing stupid more then ones. From the point of the reader he is and absolute brain dead MC. And other problem is the system explains something and then we get MC explain the same thing again with different words. Why do we need the same explanation 2x is this to run up word count or do you think your readers are so stupid they can't understand a simple explanation by the system. But still the biggest problem is MC and his stupid personality & lack of a functioning brain. Then the author explains it as he could not think under stress. When all he had to do is use 2 brain cells and come up with and idea that was not waste your biggest trump card on a common snake. The MC also feels bad about killing common bugs. That's right the MC absorbs power and feels bad about killing some common everyday BUGS. Imagine what a SHITshow this will turn out to be in the later chapters when he needs to kill and enemy when he can't even kill a shitty BUG/ fly and feel bad about it. Some of MC's lines "I already felt pain in my heart that I had mindlessly absorbed so many of them previously, but at that time I didn't really know what I was doing." Oooo no or MC killed 10 BUGS how will he ever live with himself. What a mass murderer he should be locked up in jail for life for daring to kill a few BUGS. "but I would rather avoid senseless killings, even if the target is just an animal or insect" Yea how dare he kill some random bugs so that he can evolve and grow stronger. I can't get myself to read about gooody 2 shoes MC. Maybe this is up your alley but its differently not up mine. Even if he changes later it's just so stupid we have a naive retard for and MC. BTW saved this review so when author removes it i can post it again. Because it was already suspicious there where no low star reviews. It's impossible for a novel to have no low star reviews unless he removes them all for a made up reason.

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The Last Primal

Shaele

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Shaele
ShaeleAuthorShaele

First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person. I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion. I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities.

House
HouseLv15House

Wuut? Whats so bad about my review? Did I say something untrue? NO Did I give a LOWBOM review? NO Is my low score unjustified? NO, its my opinion aka my review Look at my score, did I give it a low review on something it did not deserve it? NO Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ So I have no clue what your talking about my review is not offensive it any way. I did not say something that was untrue nor did I color-code it so it won't hurt your feelings. I gave my personal opinion. You have no reason to remove it sure its a low review but i did give it 4 ⭐ Writing Quality & 3⭐Stability of Updates. The rest is personal opinion. Ill do you one better its a reincarnation novel where MC has no memories & its a system that does not give information when needed. What do you call a novel like this? So idk why you are so mad about the review all I did was say whats true. So lets get into your comment. Who knows you might even change my mind. "First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person" - How did i not give you respect? Did I say something bad about you? NO Did I attack your personality? NO Is this a specific attack on your novel? NO Did I read you novel and give my opinion (right or wrong) YES "I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. " I like how when someone says something bad it's not giving you respect . This comment however is a personal attack on my character so idk what your talking about when you say I did not give you RESPECT. BTW I did read your synopsis and there was noting in there that hinted to this kind of novel. Ill do you one better i even read a few review b4 starting your novel. TBO your synopses was not really good it did not say what your novel was going to be about. "If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion." Well I can be wrong but mostly when i start to read a novel I look for a few good reviews and then go read a few (normal non troll) bad reviews to see what they have to say about the novel and then I can make my own conclusion about what this novel is going to be about. I just put a note there to let you know if you remove it for no reason i was going to post it again till you give a reason for the removal. "I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. " Clearly you don't respect my opinion because you are saying you will remove it. When all i did was give my personal review (good or bad) its what I find your novel to be (it can be wrong) but its my review. Also you are clearly threatening me for no reason when all i did was give your novel a 5/10 I wonder what you will do when people give you a 1⭐ review. "Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities. " I have no clue what this is about. Like I said where was I wrong in my review point it out and ill give you my opinion on how i came to that conclusion. Again your comment this is more of and attack then my review. I wonder if you will read it all b4 removing my comment. Also why threaten me with further actions. 🤣🤣🤣

Shaele:First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person. I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion. I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities.
Hahadavis
HahadavisLv5Hahadavis

This is a good review in my opinion, you didn't attack him personally or disrespected him so idk why he's being butthurt about it........ I hope you copy-paste the review incase he deletes it and post it again!

House:Wuut? Whats so bad about my review? Did I say something untrue? NO Did I give a LOWBOM review? NO Is my low score unjustified? NO, its my opinion aka my review Look at my score, did I give it a low review on something it did not deserve it? NO Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ So I have no clue what your talking about my review is not offensive it any way. I did not say something that was untrue nor did I color-code it so it won't hurt your feelings. I gave my personal opinion. You have no reason to remove it sure its a low review but i did give it 4 ⭐ Writing Quality & 3⭐Stability of Updates. The rest is personal opinion. Ill do you one better its a reincarnation novel where MC has no memories & its a system that does not give information when needed. What do you call a novel like this? So idk why you are so mad about the review all I did was say whats true. So lets get into your comment. Who knows you might even change my mind. "First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person" - How did i not give you respect? Did I say something bad about you? NO Did I attack your personality? NO Is this a specific attack on your novel? NO Did I read you novel and give my opinion (right or wrong) YES "I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. " I like how when someone says something bad it's not giving you respect . This comment however is a personal attack on my character so idk what your talking about when you say I did not give you RESPECT. BTW I did read your synopsis and there was noting in there that hinted to this kind of novel. Ill do you one better i even read a few review b4 starting your novel. TBO your synopses was not really good it did not say what your novel was going to be about. "If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion." Well I can be wrong but mostly when i start to read a novel I look for a few good reviews and then go read a few (normal non troll) bad reviews to see what they have to say about the novel and then I can make my own conclusion about what this novel is going to be about. I just put a note there to let you know if you remove it for no reason i was going to post it again till you give a reason for the removal. "I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. " Clearly you don't respect my opinion because you are saying you will remove it. When all i did was give my personal review (good or bad) its what I find your novel to be (it can be wrong) but its my review. Also you are clearly threatening me for no reason when all i did was give your novel a 5/10 I wonder what you will do when people give you a 1⭐ review. "Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities. " I have no clue what this is about. Like I said where was I wrong in my review point it out and ill give you my opinion on how i came to that conclusion. Again your comment this is more of and attack then my review. I wonder if you will read it all b4 removing my comment. Also why threaten me with further actions. 🤣🤣🤣
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House
HouseLv15House

Thanks!

Hahadavis:This is a good review in my opinion, you didn't attack him personally or disrespected him so idk why he's being butthurt about it........ I hope you copy-paste the review incase he deletes it and post it again!
Daoist_ChaosLord
Daoist_ChaosLordLv6Daoist_ChaosLord

There is a way of expressing your dislike without being rude. Saying trash trash trash all the time makes you feel good ? Instead of saying that its trash you can simply give constructive advice, otherwise your just being an ass.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

the heads up is appreciated. along with in-depth explanation. **: do you have any novel suggestions? isekai, transmigration, reincarnated, etc [ just not ntr, netore, reverse harem, gen bend, rape MC, etc ]

Kyubikn
KyubiknLv4Kyubikn

if that's how the story goes then all I can say is that authors synopsis is very misleading.

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3

It's called being straightforward, I like people like him who don't hold their tongue or sugar coat their words like you snowflakes.

Daoist_ChaosLord:There is a way of expressing your dislike without being rude. Saying trash trash trash all the time makes you feel good ? Instead of saying that its trash you can simply give constructive advice, otherwise your just being an ass.
Tsuzuna
TsuzunaLv13Tsuzuna

You remove revievs that are only for xp? Then how come I see 5star spam revievs fot xp as old as 2, 3 and 4 months? I'd say you get way too aggresive when he did post constructive criticism just not sugarcoated. And I must agree with most points he made.

Shaele:First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person. I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion. I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

I wonder when you will be deleted as the author has ultimate power over comments. Good review by the way.

KiIIuaZoldyck
KiIIuaZoldyckLv15KiIIuaZoldyck

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Shaele:First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person. I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion. I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities.
Me_Me_7345
Me_Me_7345Lv1Me_Me_7345

this author is the guy in every cultivation novel that gets offended when someone says his cultivation is low then says he will get his dad to ruin his life if he doesn't take it back.

House:Wuut? Whats so bad about my review? Did I say something untrue? NO Did I give a LOWBOM review? NO Is my low score unjustified? NO, its my opinion aka my review Look at my score, did I give it a low review on something it did not deserve it? NO Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ So I have no clue what your talking about my review is not offensive it any way. I did not say something that was untrue nor did I color-code it so it won't hurt your feelings. I gave my personal opinion. You have no reason to remove it sure its a low review but i did give it 4 ⭐ Writing Quality & 3⭐Stability of Updates. The rest is personal opinion. Ill do you one better its a reincarnation novel where MC has no memories & its a system that does not give information when needed. What do you call a novel like this? So idk why you are so mad about the review all I did was say whats true. So lets get into your comment. Who knows you might even change my mind. "First of all, if you initiate a conversation (for example a review like this), it's common courtesy to give the minimum amount of respect to the other person" - How did i not give you respect? Did I say something bad about you? NO Did I attack your personality? NO Is this a specific attack on your novel? NO Did I read you novel and give my opinion (right or wrong) YES "I don't know how it goes where you live, and I do respect personal opinions, even if they are negative (I do mention this in the synopsis which, you CLEARLY didn't bother to read), and have never removed a well-thought-out review, regardless of their rating. Heck, I even kept a troll one, just to show that there is a group of neckbeards that have this weird fetish. " I like how when someone says something bad it's not giving you respect . This comment however is a personal attack on my character so idk what your talking about when you say I did not give you RESPECT. BTW I did read your synopsis and there was noting in there that hinted to this kind of novel. Ill do you one better i even read a few review b4 starting your novel. TBO your synopses was not really good it did not say what your novel was going to be about. "If my memory serves me correctly (there's no public log for me to confirm), I removed only 3 reviews which were only there for the 'XP' and clearly asked for deletion." Well I can be wrong but mostly when i start to read a novel I look for a few good reviews and then go read a few (normal non troll) bad reviews to see what they have to say about the novel and then I can make my own conclusion about what this novel is going to be about. I just put a note there to let you know if you remove it for no reason i was going to post it again till you give a reason for the removal. "I respect your opinion and will give you a chance to edit it and rephrase in a mannered, cultured way. Otherwise, you will be the 4th removal alongside with contacting my site editors for further actions. This is not the middle ages to launch grand crusades for whatever reasons you feel your little cyberspace threatened. " Clearly you don't respect my opinion because you are saying you will remove it. When all i did was give my personal review (good or bad) its what I find your novel to be (it can be wrong) but its my review. Also you are clearly threatening me for no reason when all i did was give your novel a 5/10 I wonder what you will do when people give you a 1⭐ review. "Remove the shackles of your ill-cultured surroundings and be a better person. I will give you a few hours since you clearly monitor the activities. " I have no clue what this is about. Like I said where was I wrong in my review point it out and ill give you my opinion on how i came to that conclusion. Again your comment this is more of and attack then my review. I wonder if you will read it all b4 removing my comment. Also why threaten me with further actions. 🤣🤣🤣
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