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Review Detail of Aardae in The Last Primal

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Aardae
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This story had/has great potential, that is undeniable. The story began amazingly only to fall into something I can only describe as an aimleww mess. I'd love to continue further in hopes of the story regaining its once great footing but due to it becoming a paid story, I cannot say it is currently worth the investment to read further. If someone does have insight on how the story progresses and if its worth to continue pay to continue reading, I'd be all ears. I really do like where the story was shaping up to be but currently I really feel like it fell from grace. Thanks for reading, this was just my two cents. Feel free to have your own opinion and I recommend you give the novel a shot, since I am no judge just an opinionated reader :)

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The Last Primal

Shaele

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Shaele
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Hi! There's no problem here, everyone has that own tastes. Sadly though, you write in ambiguity so I have no idea which section you found lacking to your standards. :)