Review Detail of Lionessa in Vyr's journey through the multiverse
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Great bit of power fantasy with yuri.... so yeah I’m totally in and completely biased. Beyond that it seems the author is willing to have our MC work to attain power which I enjoy. Just some minor gripes on writing quality like wrond word usage and grammar errors but nothing too egregious. Thanks for this interesting story and hope you continue to write this to what ever end you have imagined.
Vyr's journey through the multiverse
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da feck meh speahll cheak is busted. oh teh nohs bros. in all seriousness you can see around ch 18 and after the grammar errors went up as i focused more on the story and stopped proof reading. And hopefully the story wont end anytime soon. if it does it would be from an outside source as i have over 15 worlds i at least want to touch on. some will be shorter than others obviously but back on topic, i hope you and everyone else sticks around for the ride. Thanks for the reveiw and i hope you will continue to enjoy! :)