Review Detail of Vyte in Closed Beta That Only I Played
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I enjoy the story, it'd be a 4.5 star review... if it weren't for the fact that the translation/editing makes it seem like this is MTL. The grammar is horrible, awful wording choices, many sentences dont even make sense. instead of characters saying "haha" or being described as laughing, they say "lol" almost wish this was MTL'd instead of whoever did this awful job. Even though I like the story, im kinda rooting for this to not be picked from the trial reads unless they re-edit or re-translate all these 60 chapters
Closed Beta That Only I Played
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No, its not "perfectly readable". Its only slightly better than MTL. there are multiple times where i had to go back and re-read segments or entire chapters because some things made no sense the way they were worded. Its all very unprofessional, and it'd be understandable if one character said "lol" instead of laughing as a character quirk, but they almost all do, which is very unrealistic, unprofessional, and immersion breaking, its very poor writing in the state that it is now, giving it 3 stars was being generous.
Cewu:I thing you might have exaggerated how bad the translation is. It is bad ngl, but most inconsistencies are in the stats and stuff like that. It isnt even that bad honestly. it is perfectly readable and you can understand what is happening just fine. The MC also somethings says Lol instead of laughing... people do that u know?
I thing you might have exaggerated how bad the translation is. It is bad ngl, but most inconsistencies are in the stats and stuff like that. It isnt even that bad honestly. it is perfectly readable and you can understand what is happening just fine. The MC also somethings says Lol instead of laughing... people do that u know?
Cewu:I thing you might have exaggerated how bad the translation is. It is bad ngl, but most inconsistencies are in the stats and stuff like that. It isnt even that bad honestly. it is perfectly readable and you can understand what is happening just fine. The MC also somethings says Lol instead of laughing... people do that u know?
Yeah, i know 10 people in my friend circle whom all say lol... lol xD. Even I do it sometimes. Though i get what you are getting at... but as much as I remeber when there was laughter it was mostly internet related or it was him. meh whatever. I didn't really find it that hard to read... i guess readability is subjective... but I zoomed through it perfectly fine... with some jarring stuff like the stats not being always consistent in translations and stuff. Though it didn't bother me much since the story was understandable. It is not slightly better than MLT because... for f sake... in MLT you cant even understand entire chapters and you need to hunt for meaning all over the place. This is much better, but it is defenitly lacking in terms of quality since it should be a professional translation. (I have heard that the translators aren't paid that much... and who knows they might not have experienced Korean translators or they translate Korean -> Chinise -> English... who knows)
Vyte:No, its not "perfectly readable". Its only slightly better than MTL. there are multiple times where i had to go back and re-read segments or entire chapters because some things made no sense the way they were worded. Its all very unprofessional, and it'd be understandable if one character said "lol" instead of laughing as a character quirk, but they almost all do, which is very unrealistic, unprofessional, and immersion breaking, its very poor writing in the state that it is now, giving it 3 stars was being generous.