Review Detail of NotUse in Frictionless

Greetings to the author! This is my review of the first two chapters of your book. In the first chapter, I am completely hooked by the first paragraph. Tsu, it's quite a nice name for a character. However, Tsu and the other characters lack a few descriptions, giving me a hard time to portray them. When it comes to the dialogues, they seem to be unique and well-thought. I am not good when it comes to grammar, therefore, I have no right to judge yours. When it comes to descriptions pertaining to scenarios and scenes, they seem to be vivid and explicit. As for the stability of updates, let's just say you update frequently haha! Anyways, keep up the good work author!!!