First off why is there so many 5 star reviews for this? It absolutely does not deserve the stars. It gives no actual feedback to the author by saying it's all good when it's apparent that there are problems in the story. I don't know what to say it's all poorly edited if even at that, there is not a single thing about this novel that could have been worse. Reading it is difficult due to constant spelling mistakes, wierd pacing and having half of the chapter just be stats that have zero meaning. I tried to at least give it a fair shot by reading through 30 something chapters thinking maybe it gets better it doesn't. Author if you're reading this can you try using a spell checking extension on your browser, it would make it so much more readable. I hope you don't get discouraged and try to improve.
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