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PrimordialMofu
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It had some good *cough* *cough* cliches *cough* *cough*, but it was written horribly. The MC is a Enforcer hero type but they are also like 8 or something. It makes no sense to have like 6 people in harem when you're 10 or something, especially in a world where the average lifespan isn't that short. It's a wish fulfillment type novel that went wrong. It took way too much effort to read this through with the fact the author is a native English speaker (at least it doesn't say otherwise). The world Familias aren't mentioned till they are needed which isn't a bad thing, the author just doesn't explain what each famila mentioned does. Do not read unless you are high or drunk and or not going to throw up. Because the story changes location,perspective and various others settings so often if this were real you would puke your guts out. The Characters have no development and little design. He get hephaestus in the harem by healing her eye and 5 minutes later they making out. The update stability is all other the place, sometimes it's daily, other times it's once a week. I'm surprised the story even got on the leaderboard for some amount of time ( 2 weeks or so). It's bad don't read.

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Samelies
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You forgot the part where, as like a 10 year old, he was accused of wanting to assault Eina.....

Samelies
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Sexually...

Samelies:You forgot the part where, as like a 10 year old, he was accused of wanting to assault Eina.....
CGV_5264
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I am really happy I read the reviews first, this story sounds horrible.

Samelies:Sexually...
Samelies
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ya... it was horrid.....

CGV_5264:I am really happy I read the reviews first, this story sounds horrible.